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Section 6.11.2

Modifiers of Nouns

Modifiers of nouns should be placed either immediately before or immediately after the noun. If another phrase is allowed to separate the noun and its modifier, the modifier may be misinterpreted as applying to a noun in the separating phrase rather than to the original noun.


Weak

More than 750 metric tons of lead ingots were examined by the quality control inspectors that circle the base of the tower. [The ingots, not the quality control inspectors, circle the base of the tower.]

Improved

More than 750 metric tons of lead ingots that circle the base of the tower were examined by the quality control inspectors.

Improved

The quality control inspectors examined more than 750 metric tons of lead ingots that circle the base of the tower.


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