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Section 6.5

Comma Splice

Never link two independent clauses with just a comma; this is known as a comma splice error. You can correct a comma splice in four ways:

  1. Separate the independent clauses into two separate sentences. Punctuate both sentences with periods.
  2. Replace the comma with a semicolon or with a semicolon and a conjunctive adverb such as however or furthermore. (The conjunctive adverb is then normally followed by a comma.)
  3. Replace the comma with a comma and a coordinating conjunction.
  4. Make one of the clauses into a subordinate clause.


Unacceptable

In 1931 Oppenheimer attempted to find an equation for the photon that would be an analogue to Dirac's equation for the electron, he failed in this effort.

Acceptable

In 1931 Oppenheimer attempted to find an equation for the photon that would be an analogue to Dirac's equation for the electron. He failed in this effort.

Acceptable

In 1931 Oppenheimer attempted to find an equation for the photon that would be an analogue to Dirac's equation for the electron; he failed in this effort. [or ". . . electron; however, he failed . . ."]

Acceptable

In 1931 Oppenheimer attempted to find an equation for the photon that would be an analogue to Dirac's equation for the electron, but he failed in this effort.

Acceptable

Although in 1931 Oppenheimer attempted to find an equation for the photon that would be an analogue to Dirac's equation for the electron, he failed in this effort.


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