Title: Brisingr Author: Christopher Paolini Year: 2008 Publisher: Knopf (Random House) Reviewer: Naomi Hinchen Let me start by saying that I'm not a Paolini-hater. I quite liked "Eragon" the first time I read it, and "Eldest" only really dragged on my nerves in the very elf-heavy chapters. But "Brisingr" has been a long, hard, seven-month slog. If I hadn't promised to review it, I'm not sure I would ever have finished. Paolini's prose is sometimes hard to read a lot of at a stretch, but I've realized that this is not the reason I had so much trouble finishing. The real problem is that Eragon is far from the most interesting character in the book. I always enjoy the chapters told from Roran or Nasuada's perspective, and I can think of a few other characters who are far more entertaining to read about than Eragon. When I was reading Eldest I thought it was just because he was spending so much time with the elves, because Inheritance Trilogy elves are exactly the kind that most annoy me: aloof and ethereal and somehow convinced they're superior to everyone else. But even when there was nary an elf in sight, it was Eragon's chapters that tended to bog me down. And since, as the protagonist, he gets far more chapters than anyone else, I had to force myself through his sections to get to the parts I actually found worth reading. I think that part of the reason Eragon is one of the least interesting characters is that he's a little ridiculously overpowered. The characters with no magical powers at all have to solve their problems in other ways, whether in battle or in politics. Eragon can do just about anything he likes with magic, so the only real challenge he faces is fighting equally powerful opponents. Unfortunately, the only really powerful enemies he has are Murtagh and Galbatorix, one of whom is sadly underused in "Brisingr" and the other of whom has yet to appear at all. No one else even comes close to being a threat. But there's an even bigger problem here, which is that nearly everything in this book is filler. Near the beginning, Eragon spends about five chapters on a detour that makes no sense, is a completely stupid thing to do, and doesn't really matter in the long run. The chapters about the election of the new dwarf king were somewhat interesting but unnecessary. And unless Elva turns out to be incredibly important in Book 4, she could have been entirely cut from the series. If Paolini had been willing to make a few judicious cuts to "Eldest" as well, he could have stuck with his original plan for a trilogy without harming the story arc at all. Here's hoping that the fourth book will finally get down to business.