home, 2022
(Parable of) the Merry Grapes and the Wandering Nose
Looking ahead I almost missed it, but the air was so sweet I reminisced it. Sky's reminder to cherish and wonder -- to look up! to look under! Let the world reveal itself to you, and savor that wine dark hue. Mmmmm abounds: in a fresh of air, a fresh of cherry, in breeze made sweet by juicy berry.
The base image is a photo of a grape vine taken by Sarah while on a walk with SJ.
Synanim
Iteration 1
Sarah
In the meadow, you find a memory from the future. Ambient sensation, the universe reminding you of something you hadn't experienced yet. Look up, let the world reveal itself to you. What's fresh and juicy is hiding in plain sight.
Maddie
Looking ahead I almost missed it,
Mmmm. So sweet
Dae
the beckoning of hidden treasures. Air made sweet; sky holds expressions of earth. These are just reminders to cherish wonder. The bounty of miracles are everywhere, to the wandering nose.
Luke
A fresh of air
A fresh of berry
A fresh of summer, juicy cherry
A fresh of warmly,
Fresh spring breeze
A fresh of wind blows on my knees
Iteration 2
Sarah
In the meadow you find a memory from the future. A fresh of air, a fresh of berry, air made sweet, by juicy cherry (née grape). These are reminders to cherish wonder. Let the world reveal itself to you: the bounty of miracles is everywhere.
Dae
Looking ahead I almost missed it, a fresh of wind beckons of hidden treasures, whispering, "let the world reveal itself to you". Sky's reminder to cherish air and earth and wonder. The bounty of miracles are everywhere, to the wandering sense.
Maddie
A fresh of air, a fresh of breeze, a fresh of scent makes me sneeze. Looking ahead I almost missed it, but the air twas so sweet I reminisced it. Look up, the world reveals itself to you, the beckoning of treasures ...
Sky's reminder to cherish air and earth and wonder, miracles are everywhere to the sense that wanders
Luke
What's fresh and juicy is invisible to the eye, but bountiful to the wandering nose.
Air made sweet, so sweet you almost missed it.
But just look up and let the world reveal itself to you
Mmmm.
Combining
Looking ahead I almost missed it, but the air -- twas so sweet -- I reminisced it. A fresh of air, a fresh of cherry, breeze made sweet, by juicy berry. Sky's reminder to cherish and wonder. Let the world reveal itself to you: the bounty of miracles is everywhere.
Sky's reminder to cherish and wonder, floating above in a wine dark hue. Let the world reveal itself to you! The bounty of miracles is everywhere: in a fresh of air, a fresh of cherry, in breeze made sweet by juicy berry.
then, mmmmm, that wine dark hue.
. Sky's reminder to cherish earth and merry,
Remember to look up, remember to seek wonder-- heed the sky's
Sky's reminder to cherish and wonder, (to loo k up -- and let the world reveal itself -- before you go under. )
Sky's reminder to cherish and wonder, to
Sky's reminder to cherish and awe, to ... eat the grapes raw ...
Let the earth reveal itself to you, and it'll be mmmmmm through and through
Let the world reveal itself to you: there is bounty everywhere(y) // miracles
