Date: Tue, 3 Jun 1997 22:01:15 EDT From: mo-tink-ing Subject: EXERCISE: Show, Don't Tell... Thank you all for having such strong feelings, and for taking the time to express yourselves so forcefully. But could I ask you to go a bit farther? Put in just a little bit more time and effort and show me. Write the scene, wring the tail of the tiger, walk the fence and fall into the alley, break my arm with a thrown stone, make me gasp with the shock of suspended disbelief... tink