Pauly Heller At 02:09 PM 5/22/98 EDT, you wrote: Hi, all. Hope I'm not overdoing it with these submissions, but I'm afraid I keep doing it wrong. I promise, this is the last time for this one (at least, until I take all your marvelous suggestions and do a few rewrites). PBHELLER wrote: Well, here goes! After three months or so on the List, I'm finally subbing. I can hardly believe it myself. Just a few quick notes about myself, since none of you know me -- I grew up in southwestern Pennsylvania, graduated from Springfield College in Massachusetts in 1972, married in 1975, have three kids, and now live in Phoenix, AZ. By the way, while at SC, I was kicked off the gymnastics team for partying too much. With all that time on my hands, I became involved in campus politics, participated in an administration building takeover, and was carted off to jail in a paddywagon. Now, however, I'm a "born again" Messianic Jew, which is why I know about Sally Stuart's Christian Writer's Market guide. Okay, enough already! So what have I written? Here it is (crits welcome, of course) -- Late Night Spat Rags on a clothesline Flap in gusts of anger, Demanding attention By their noisy intrusions On the landscape Of my mind. Sharp words hang in space "A disturbance in the Force;" Revisited retorts stir breezes Into whipping winds. I can't deny passions Hung out to dry While you sleep.