Avoid using long strings of modifiers or nouns. These stacked modifiers and nouns can be hard to read and sometimes create ambiguity. Add a few words (especially prepositions and conjunctions) to make the relationships between nouns clear to the reader.
Previous work has shown that a purified pro-oxidant, vitamin
E-deficient fish oil diet protects mice against malaria
Previous work has shown that feeding a pro-oxidant diet
containing fish oil, but devoid of vitamin E, protects mice against
--Orville A. Levande et al., "Protection against Murine Cerebral Malaria by Dietary-Induced Oxidative Stress," Journal of Parasitology
We have analyzed low-energy, interplanetary charged, sun-sourced
particle flux time series.
We have analyzed the time series of fluxes of low-energy
interplanetary charged particles, whose ultimate origin is the
--David J. Thomson et al., "Propagation of Solar Oscillations through the Interplanetary Medium," Nature
The system uses a high peak power single frequency low divergent
light beam produced by pulsed lasers. [The modification of
beam is difficult to sort out.]
The system uses pulsed lasers that operate under high peak power to produce a single-frequency light beam with low divergence.